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Copywriter’s Toolkit Review — The Headline Generator

Sunday, May 11th, 2008

The headline generator — worth the price alone!

( John Ritskowitz’ Copywriter’s Toolkit )

If you need a headline — for an article, a salesletter, email subject lines — the online headline generator is superb. How superb? Well, I was hired to write some headlines for a client for a little over the price of the toolkit. I have more than a few headline writing resources. And, to tell you the truth, the headline generator in John’s toolkit wasn’t what I considered using first.

But after going thru a number of different tools, John’s headline generator gave me the greatest ease in fulfilling the client’s request.

How Does The Headline Generator Work?

The headline generator asks several questions that help to focus on what are elements of proven, successful headlines.

The headline generator harnesses the power of computers to do what computers do so well — create hundreds of combinations at the click of a button. And then you can select from all the combinations the ones you like and want to save — and even make changes and create some more!

So it turns headline writing inside out. Rather than taking the checklist and applying it to a headline, it takes the points of checklists, gathers the information, and generates a candy-store full of checklist-satisfying headlines.

To say that the headline generator can save a lot of time in what is often the copywriter’s most time-consuming task misses the point. It takes headline creation to a whole new level.

And the headline generator is only ONE tool in the copywriter’s toolkit.

I’ll be talking about more of the features of the Copywriter’s Toolkit soon … but if I’ve piqued your interest, and want to discover more about it sooner, why not just check it out here:

John Ritskowitz’ Copywriter’s Toolkit

How Does The Cost Of Gas Affect You As A Marketer?

Saturday, March 15th, 2008

Preamble: You can ignore this if you want; it just tells you how I got to thinking about the situation, with a bit of local color of Silicon Valley thrown in. Want faster reading? Just go to “Meat“.

Monday, I am attending Mashup University at the Computer History Museum in Mountain View. It’s 15 miles away from my home in San Jose.

Now the Computer History Museum is located in a “public transportation undesirable” neighborhood. East of 101, high tech companies abound among the streets — Shoreline, Charleston, Amphitheatre Parkway. Companies such as…Google. Sun and Silicon Graphics used to be in this area as well. My former employer, Ariba, had been located in this area when I hired on in 2000. Microsoft’s WebTV (now MSN TV), who had competed for my employment at that time, had recently moved to facilities tucked away in a corner south of Shoreline.

Most of the companies provide transportation from other points into this area. Some from the Mountain View Train Station. Google, all the way from points in San Jose. I seem to recall that several smaller companies pooled together to provide a small local bus, a bit smaller than those you take to get to the hotel from the airport, to their employees.

So, hating commute traffic, I decided to find out if there was some possible way to get to my destination from San Jose. I used the handy site, http://www.511.org

But what was amazing was that 511.org, in an attempt to encourage my use of public transportation, pointed out that the cost of my trip on public transportation, $5.25, would cost me $7.47 if I drove. 50c/mile to drive.

Oh…the problem? The route shows that I should walk from points in Mountain View, west of 101, to the Computer History Museum. The only indication of the route I should walk is an arrow from the start point to the destination point — an arrow that goes over open land (I don’t know who owns it, or what paths may exist), and crossing the 101 freeway where there is clearly no crossing) to the Computer History Museum. Completely unhelpful. Even with the Google Map.

MEAT

Europeans and the Brits (oh, and the Canadians?) must think we Americans are insane to be so concerned about gasoline going up to $4 and even $5 a gallon.

I asked our UK Warriors on the Warrior chat earlier this month how much gas (petrol) cost them.

Answer (Americans, hold onto your hats): nearly $10/gallon.

(This post is both an historical marketing comment as well as
something to think about, so if you were wondering…)

So why is $4 or $5/gal such a problem for the U.S. — and not for the countries mentioned?

I think, primarily, since the U.S. was, for a long time, the chief exporter of automobiles, we became a much more mobile economy. The automobile looms large in the American mind; boys look forward to their first cars, and tinkering with them, a passion.

The ready access to automobiles has made for a mobile economy. “Shopping Centers” were created, not just neighborhood strip malls. Local farming could give way to produce shipped from the middle of the country.

This dependence on the auto — and on trucking — reduced the dependence on railways. Much valuable right-of-way of the railways was sold off to developers.

So what does this mean going forward?

Well, there’s a site I learned about recently — the name of which escapes me, something with ‘walk’ in the name — that, given a particular point, will show you how far various kinds of shopping is from you.

Overall — economies (certainly the U.S.) are going from “information expensive, travel cheap” to “information cheap, travel expensive”.

What does this mean to you as an information marketer? (Yes, I hate to disillusion you — information marketing may or may not be as lucrative as it was in the past because there is so much more readily available. Think about it.)

Will postal mail suddenly make a comeback, as a more economical way to get goods ? More catalogs? That would be good for internet marketers, but not necessarily information marketers.

It certainly will be a boon for local businesses. And for folks looking at helping local busineses market.
Remotely located discount houses like Costco may not fair as well, when people start to include the cost of trips into their calculations. Or maybe the lines will be longer at busy times — making systems for “load balancing” customer load, by showing customers when they are busiest and when they are less busy, feasible.

Certainly, the websites which tell you where to find the cheapest gas will become even more popular — as will sites that show you how to keep your car up to get the best mileage (tire air pressure, anyone?)

So — non US folks — how do you get around? How much do you travel in a given week, and by what means?

US folks — how is the cost of price affecting you?

Marketers — how do you see the cost of gas affecting you?

Top Copywriter Michel Fortin 48-hr Copydoctor special

Thursday, August 16th, 2007

Sorry for not writing sooner, and finishing up the story I began in the last post. I was waiting to hear from someone before I continued.

However — this is breaking news and only good for (less than, now) 48 hours…

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I’ve been a member for a number of years now, and have renewed even when money was tight — it’s that good!

You owe it to yourself to at least check it out now — before he changes his mind!

On Copywriting — Drama and History in Strunk And White

Tuesday, August 7th, 2007

It’s often claimed in copywriting circles that grammar and spelling doesn’t have to be perfect.

And I have no doubt that that is true.

However, I have to wonder if there are any spelling or grammar errors in the Wall Street Journal letter; I suspect not.

So there are a couple of points that are worthwhile considering, especially those who are new to copywriting.

First, I have heard a copywriter of no little talent, John Carlton, heartily recommend Strunk & White, the “liitle book” titled “Elements of Style”.

Because the original version was published in 1918, that edition falls outside of any copyright protection, and the book can be found on the Web for free –

Here — if you wish to refer to it while writing online; or, failing that website, you can also find it at the stalwart Bartleby’s site, here.

And a version for download, here.

Strunk Wrote Alone

Interestingly enough, even though E. B. White was a student of Professor Strunk at Cornell University in 1919, he only became involved with the 43-page book after Strunk’s death in 1946.

Posthumously, Strunk Gained White As A Co-Author

The fog of time obscures what inspired publisher Macmillan & Company ro request White to revise and update the book. However, it may have been due to his authoring a laudatory article New York Times on the book. Under White the “little book” grew to over 80 pages. The classic “Strunk & White” came to be a staple of English classes throughout the U.S. after it’s initial publication in 1959 — a fame that the book never achieved during Strunk’s lifetime.

White Eschews Political Correctness — But Plea Removed in 4th Edition
White revised the “little book” 2 more times, the third edition containing an essay vigorously supporting the use of the word “he” to refer to people of any gender, instead of “they”. The fourth edition, revised in 1999 after his death, removed White’s impassioned plea — and political correctness reigns. You can purchase that most recent revision at Amazon, here: StrunkAndWhilte-4thEd — although the “illustrated” version, first published in 2005 using the 4th edition text, might be more entertaining — and a revision, due out at the end of this month, is available for pre-order